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Post by A.G. on Mar 22, 2007 0:44:21 GMT -5
Well, the page is finally up folks! Some proofreading would be great... that is if you don't mind spoilers!  In any case, scope it out and let me know what you think. |
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Post by TheBrotherOfLight on Mar 22, 2007 1:22:59 GMT -5
I could check for typos and stuff later today when I get back home if you want.
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Post by A.G. on Mar 22, 2007 1:33:37 GMT -5
Sounds great! Like the images? Some aren't as crisp as I would want them... but hell, it's a portable game. All the stuff is small! LOL
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Post by TheBrotherOfLight on Mar 22, 2007 13:22:29 GMT -5
Nothing wrong with the images dude. Here's what I thought of when I read. (Keep in mind my english isn't that great.) 1) "Metal Gear series is no stranger to a handheld system." I would change that to "Metal Gear series is no stranger to handheld systems." 2) "... an original gaming concepts." The S should go away, no? 3) When you write about camoflauge, the text leaves the image! Change that. 4) When you mention the cut-scenes is like those in DGN, you call the game Digital Novel. Maybe you should write the full name so no one thinks you don't know better. Also, you mention the game features voice acting. Why not pint out that the codec convos are silent? 5) Where I suppose you mean "but hard to use" you wrote "by hard to use". That's it for now. Is it okay if I go over the plot maybe tomorrow? Great work as always! |
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Post by A.G. on Mar 22, 2007 20:20:43 GMT -5
Thank you!!! ;D
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