SOL section is up!

[A.G.]

The SONS OF LIBERTY section is up folks, redone like the CLASSIC MG and MGS sections. SNAKE EATER is next!

Reviews/corrections please.

[Otty]

That looks sweeeeet. You re-done the text to?

[The Mad Jackyl]

Picked out a few grammatical and syntax issues


Game Features section

First sentence, first paragraph:

* replace "of" with "off"

Second to last sentence, 5th paragraph:

* Have the sentence read "A head, heart, or crotch shot will take them down immediately."

Seventh paragraph, second sentence:

* throughout should be one word

8th paragraph, last sentence:

* Sentence should read, "Such things did not pan out with the vast majority of players."

Transport Tanker

First paragraph, first sentence:

*Sentence should be reworded as "...actions did not go unnoticed..."

First paragraph, last sentence:

*Misspell of the word "through"

Second paragraph, 8th sentence:

*Change "battled" to battle

Under the "Big Shell" heading

Very minor stuff, really. I couldn't read past the part where the virus was uploaded, however, and stopped there.

[A.G.]

Thanks man, I I'll get those taken care of on my next work session!