MGS4 Section is UP!!!

[A.G.]

I finally finished the MGS4 section. Took a couple of months to gather all the facts and put it all together. But at long last, all the game section are complete. The gameplay description contain a lot of in-game secretes. Enjoy!

Any proof reading will be VERY welcome!

[trustburger]

looks good bro. mustve taken a while huh lol it took me a while to read so id imagine the effort only flaws ive noticed...

under environment last sentence. you mean echoed the setting of mgs2, not settings right?
under abilities and equipment, remove the word but from the beginning of the sentence about teh barrel
same section 2nd paragraph you said "cammo" u probably meant camo
same section 3rd paragraph. the sentence beginning with "a low psyche has the same effect as" is awkward. use a ; or turn it into 2 sentences
same s/p... use "lying down" stead of "laying down."
same s/p... combine combat high sentence with "but" statement
same s, last paragraph you said 3d camera is from mgs3... you mean mgs3:s i kno im being anal but lol
under boss fight controls you should just say metal gear rex from mgs etc.
references and marketing last paragraph you mean "apple computers are used frequently.."
under metal gear online, first sentence you meant "which was later released separately"
under act 2 solid sun, you said "braid dead" instead of "brain dead"
under act 3 third sun, you mispelled naomi somewhere.
same, "he tells that snake that" remove the first that.
same, "under the meryl's command" remove the
same, "ocelot has vamp incinerates big boss; body" you mean incinerate
act 4 twin snakes, outer heaven in red is missing the o

also, are you sure ocelot's ray is the same marines ray? also ur mistaken about teh intro... its random sure but u can change the chanel by pressing l1 etc

[A.G.]

Thanks dude! I'll get on it!

As for RAY, yes, I'm sure. Like I said in the article, the eyes are a dead give-away. Mass-produced only had one eye, in the center. The Marine had 2. Also, calling Otacon during the fight reveals a few things as well. He clearly states that "Liquid had RAY in his possession for some time now".

Can an argument be made that it's a new RAY? Yes. But what would be the point? The idea of this was to do the two originals against each other. Given the fact that it's piloted and has 2 eyes, I say it's the original Marine Ray (with the tail removed).